Friday, 5 June 2020

Product Review

Hello my name is Bijou. It was a couple days after my 8th birthday. My dad got home from work, I had no idea what was happening at the time. I went to go say hi to him. He opened his van and I thought he was just getting his gear out but there was a massive package, he said happy late birthday. They had surprised me with a trampoline! He got the tramp out, I wanted to put it up straight away but it was getting dark.


I waited until the weekend to put it up. But before that my mum realised the packaging. It sucked! We had high hopes that the tramp would be alright. When we opened it looked alright. We finished putting it up but realised there was a bunch of holes and big pieces of thread sticking up. My family and I were like what!


The next day we unassembled the tramp. We packaged it up and sent it off to the company we got it from. While that was happening my mum wrote an email to the company. We waited a couple weeks for it to arrive, finally it arrived. I was pretty happy but it was so annoying having to wait. We got the new one for free atleast! We put it up and enjoyed.


I was pretty disappointed but y parents were even more disappointed. I still have the tramp and it’s doing well.

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