Tuesday, 3 March 2020

This is just to say

This is Just to Say 
by William Carlos Williams & Bijou

I have cleaned my room
But i have shoved everything under my bed like everything that was in 
my room and which you were 
you were probably 
Going to clean it but I thought i would help
Forgive me it was very helpful 

It was so nice and tidy and so clean

2 comments:

  1. Hi Bijou,

    What a great poem. I remember doing the same thing when I was a kid, but I would shove everything in my wardrobe!
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    Whaea Vicki

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  2. Hi Bijou,
    I am Billie from Karoro School. We did the same thing as you with the poem parody by William Carlos Williams. I talked about when my brother and I covered ourselves with felt pen It was fun. I still shove things in my closet floor or in my drawers and when my mum opens the cupboard door everything falls out everywhere! I like how you do your poem about cleaning your room because it helps people with a lot of stuff and now they know where to put their stuff.

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. 
Positive - something I have done well.
Thoughtful - a sentence or more that  lets me know you that you read/watched or listened to what I had to say.
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