I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Friday, 28 August 2020
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Bijou, I thought this was a creative way to do a poem about the Titanic. It displays some lovely words about what happened. Did you think about adding a picture of the Titanic?
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