LI: To retell and describe an event or experience
Variety of sentences length
Very short sentences.
Red, white & blue sentences
Simple sentences
As I sat down at my table, I waited for something to happen..
Charlie wrapped the blindfold around. As you can probably tell I was partnered with Charlie. He wrapped the blindfold around my eyes and nose, blinding me from the light. This was just before lunch in class. Charlie walked away and got something. My brain was confused. What is he getting? This was for our writing task. To describe an experience. That’s why you're reading this and that’s why I'm writing this.
I heard bags popping. Sounded like a food bag, but what food could be? My mind twisted. At the time I could only see pitch black. Charlie told me the thing was right in front of me. I could smell salt “mmm yummy”. I placed my hands on my desk and felt around. Finally my hands had found what seemed to be a small packet of something. I grabbed something and pulled it out. It was something greasy, oval and hard. I put it into my mouth “crunch”. I thought to myself what could this be? Ahh! It’s ready salted chips and I even guessed the brand it was bluebird. Bits got stuck in my teeth.
This was a really fun activity to do. I hope we do something like this again. Maybe you could do this with someone?
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